Scene Outline Critique

Have you written an outline for your story?

Or are you having plot and structure issues, but your story isn’t ready for a manuscript evaluation?

You might consider a scene outline critique. 

Each client will provide what happens in each scene (paragraph each) with extra information like conflict, the main character’s emotional state, and critical information revealed.

I’ll provide feedback by analyzing the plot and structure, cause-and-effect chain, and characterization of the main character for each scene in the outline. 

Deliverables: 

• Scene outline critique letter (1 - 3 pages)

• In-line comments in the outline

• 1 - 3 hours of complimentary email support