Developmental Editor & Book Coach

Specializing in Romance

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Whether you write fantasy romance or MM romance, you’re always hit with that “I finally finished” zing when you type The End.

After the euphoria dissipates, you’re left wondering how you’re going to tackle the big-picture issues in your manuscript.

Take a deep breath.

Sometimes, you need a professional companion guiding you through the dark night of the soul (an editor) before you can glimpse the sunrise.

I’ll be your supportive editor or book coach who will illuminate potential solutions to improve the chemistry between your romantic interests or help you create more realistic characters.

All these brainstorming ideas will be shared via in-line manuscript markups, editorial or critique letters, and limited complimentary email support.

One thing to keep in mind is always figuring out what resonates with your vision of your story when you’re ready for revisions.

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What service is right for you?

  • Book Coaching

    Do you have a story idea, but you can’t figure out how to write the outline? Or maybe you have the outline finished, but you’re stuck on how to start the first chapter. If any of these questions resonate with you, my book coaching packages can help.

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  • Scene Outline Critique

    Do you need help finishing your outline? Or do you need the structure and plot analyzed before you start writing the story? This service is ideal for writers who aren’t finished writing their outline, haven’t started writing their story, or aren’t ready for the developmental editing stage.

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  • Manuscript Evaluation

    Do you need developmental editing help, but you don’t want to be overwhelmed with too much feedback or need more financial assistance? This service involves less scope of work and can be more affordable for you.

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  • Developmental Edit

    Have you self-edited your manuscript as much as possible? Does it still have big-picture issues like plot holes or unrealistic dialogue? I’ll analyze big-picture issues in your manuscript and provide one or more potential solutions.

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Are you interested in personalized feedback?

A sample edit might be right for you.

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Benefits of receiving a sample edit:

  • Receive personalized feedback that you can implement in future revisions.

  • Determine if my editorial style resonates with you.

  • See how I would approach editing your precious story by receiving in-line comments and a memo (like a mini editorial letter).

  • Get customized quotes that keeps your budget in mind.

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Sunbeams create breathtaking moments where magic and happy endings feel possible.

That magical moment also occurs at midnight, via magical worlds in romance, fantasy, and paranormal stories.

I’ve been reading romance, fantasy, and YA novels for over 17 years!

As a developmental editor and book coach, analyzing world-building and romantic buildup in manuscripts is part of my job.

Schedule a brainstorming session with me to figure out which editing service your manuscript needs!

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Testimonials

  • Sloan Cooper, MM Romance Author

    “I can’t thank Leila enough for her incredible guidance. As a debut author, I was incredibly nervous going into the editing process and had no idea what to expect. Leila was not only understanding of that, but she walked me through everything step by step with such grace and clarity—it made all the difference. She was reassuring, professional, and kind, with clear communication and feedback that was both insightful and easy to understand. Her feedback has truly elevated my manuscript, giving me the confidence I needed to move forward in my publishing journey. What once felt overwhelming suddenly felt achievable. I would absolutely work with her again—and recommend her without hesitation.”

  • A. Ang, Dark Fantasy Romance Author

    "Working with Leila Sanders has been an absolute pleasure. Her insightful feedback helped me strengthen both the storyline and the characters in The King of Ironwall, guiding me to see angles and possibilities I might have otherwise missed. Thanks to her thoughtful edits, the narrative feels tighter and the characters more fully realized. Throughout the process, Leila was always prompt, friendly, and reliable, delivering her work on time and communicating with warmth and clarity. I’m truly grateful for her expertise and would happily recommend her to any author looking to elevate their manuscript."

  • E.L.

    “Leila offers amazing value as a developmental editor. She has great insight and understanding of how to shape a story, and she is flexible, communicative, and very easy to work with.”

  • Maia Kinley, Romance Author

    "Leila provided developmental edits on my debut novel and I was so much more confident with my novel after working with her. She's professional, responsive, and organized. Her help was invaluable and I highly recommend her."

  • Monica Cooke, Fathom

    “I'm completely blown away. Your comments / feedback are SO helpful...I also really appreciate the guidance on how to move forward. This is my first time working with an editor and I can absolutely see how it can be overwhelming to figure out where to go from here… I think you did an AMAZING job and would highly recommend you to anyone who'll listen!”

  • Linda G. Hill, author at Cardinal Rose Publications and copyeditor at Penlight Editing

    "Leila's feedback on my novel was amazing! Her eye for detail is sharp and straight to the point, and encouraging as well."